I want your version of commitment,

your kind of forever packaged in honest promises.

Whether be it a ring placed on finger at the end of an isle 

or your name on the space next to mine on a lease, 

I want your version of commitment.

We can go half and procreate together,

or make plans to relocate together.

We can travel to the places you dreamed of before you knew of my existence or we can get lost in places where our love is forbidden.

I want us to commit to more than just the idea of us

or chase the idea of paradise;

I want to be the eden where your love grows

and the only one who knows your true soul.

Written by Jade Novelist

2 Responses

  1. This is the best version of commitment. I love this poem Bro, I wish I could read it for someone special.

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